I was once very young
Who would sing any song
I would laugh at any joke
And would chuckle as I talk
I was once truly free
As a sparrow on a tree
I would fly here and there
And could soar without a care
I was bold, I was daring
I was soft, I was caring
I would venture anywhere
And may touch a star up there
I had once a dancing soul
That would dart, never crawl
I had heart ready to spark
If a beauty hits the mark
Now I feel so very tame
With no fire or a flame
With no twinkles in my eyes
Oh old age stop your sighs
Oh my youth call again
Wake me up, jerk the brain
Dust my soul, brush the rust
Bring me laughter with a gust
Oh my youth bring me cheers
Ring your bells in my ears
Shine your sun and chase the rain
Flash your rainbow once again
Ghanim Anaz
Watford, Herts, U.K
April 2013
What a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it so much; it must apply to so many
of us.
Kind regards.
Dr Maureen Jalili
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Ghanim
What a wonderful poet you are.
What a wonderful poet you are.
This poem took my mind to my childhood when we
had nothing to worry about.
Now I want to escape our present and old age
problems and remember our days in Kirkuk, playing golf and enjoying the
weather.
I miss you, God bless you.
Azzam Baker
Azzam Baker
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Great poem Jiddo.
You're a true wordsmith!
Omar Anaz
Omar Anaz
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This is a wonderful poem from a wonderful friend.
Mowaffaq Al-Assad
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Thank you Akhi Ghanim for sharing your rhyme with me.
Tariq Shafiq
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you are still young
ReplyDeleteyou are still the song
you are the spirit of No in front of the wrong
your speaking heart dancing
under sun under the rain
dancing and chanting the human song.
best regards
Note:
Dear Amo Ghanim
salam aliqum
I was so glad to hear your soft and gentle voice. God blessing you and your respectful family.
Amanj
amanjlatif@gmail.com